This is an interesting read, Looking forward to the second chapter

I love Harry/Astoria (The ship needs a name. Starry?) stories, and your worldbuilding. Have you ever considered writing longer, multi-chapter works?

I love this pairing and the way you describe the wayward magic. I also liked your description of Daphne.

When you discuss how she knows Harry wouldn’t want pity, more detail might help. Also, I found the Lord Potter title a bit off putting in this fiction; I guess I didn’t see the build up to him wanting to use honorifics.

nice chapter

This story feels familiar. I think I read an earlier version of it but it was taken down. Glad to see it's back now! Loved it, naturally.

so sweet. And so nice to see rancid Draco left in the dust.

good

I screamed a little out loud when I saw you had posted a bunch of new stories! I'm so excited! Thank you for this wonderful gem and all the others I'm going to read! I already know I'm going to love them all!

:)

Harry deserves better than a red-headed fangirl with delusions of grandeur, so this works quite well.

Great story!

Nice job showing compatibility in a small number of words.

This was brilliant. And it evoques your other fic on these two beautifully. I was so glad this morning when there was a small flood of notifications from your stories. I missed your writing.

Interesting story.

I am so happy you posted more stories! This is brilliantly done and I love the pairing. Your insight into Pureblood culture is intriguing and refreshing.