Poor Esme, emotional mind rape? Thank you for freeing her from team a**wipe.
Fav line: ["Alec picked a rainbow tie because he was 'indecisive and open to possibilities.'"]
Rosalie wish fulfillment on tap.
Aside from Leah, how will the wolves fit into this demon/vamp drama?
Awesome chapter, stay safe.

Magnificent.

Thanks for another good update.

mmmm Bella pushing blood through a bite in Rosalie's neck? doesn't sound like probable mechanics really.. it would've been better for Rose to bite her again. Also, you forgot about Charlie, but with the way things are I don't think is convenient for him (or anybody) to live there with them.

i don't see why or how that was necessary.. don't they have shit tons of money? that was reckless and out of character, nevermind that it could end up getting them exposed..

I love the fact that Bella is basically just barging in Forks, seeing almost all the Cullen and just being like..." I like you. You're coming with me." Like she is practically collecting people around for her family and giving them the best life ever.
This just getting better and better every chapter !
Still be waiting for more !

I was desperate to learn about what happened at the Cullens. What is happening to Rosalie, I hope she is not becoming mortal, rather something more powerful. Keep up the good work, it is so well written.

Hope we get to hear what happened at the cullens.

what's going on with esme?

Man, I wish this was longer! Loving the gives no sh*ts Bella and her dark crew.
Can't wait for more teasing between Bella and Rosalie.
I feel bad for Leah; sounds like her world is about to be nothing but pain until the end.
Love the apt names of Captain McBroodyPants and Private Scowls-A-Lot.
Awesome chapter, stay safe.

Can’t wait for the meeting with the Cullens.

Love this! It's different it's dark it's awesome! Can't wait for next chap, Keep up the good work. And stay safe during this time

Loving how Rose and Bella relationship is forming.

of course bella wouldn't let rose one up her lol

i love your Charlie and his and Bella's interactions. Awesome chapter, stay safe.