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The fic looks interesting, but, Hermione? Disgusting

Daphne doesn't have brown hair, she's a blonde. Astoria is the one with brown hair. I think you got it mixed up.

it's not the accio spell it's the Summoning Charm, acceptable use of the word Expelliamus to describe what he did, why tf would they only NOW be getting wands, moving the Hogwarts year fine but wands? no just no, please fuck off with the Weasleys, want to head this off right now the Unforgiveables are The Killing Curse NOT the Avada Kedavra i HATE writers saying the incantation as its name, The Cruciatus Curse and The Imperius Curse please use them correctly,

i refuse to believe Lily would not have forced Mcgonnagal to swear a vow of silence to protect her secret, The Hogwarts Express is a magical train there is no conceiveable way for it to ever be full
ok went from train to inside Hogwarts in a blink
so Harry has zero shits to give about him being a vampire possibly about to be revealed? also his mother teaches him 7th year magic but not how to protect his mind from DUMBledore?

...just no with Gryffindor you had him say he wanted to be in the same house as Greengrass then have him go Gryffindor? ah so he's an idiot not thinking anythign about blurting him beign avamprie out in the hallways ...god shoot me with this shit, so he's getting his own private room? and how EXACTLY is this not going to draw attention begging to be looked into? inshort the idea of a Harry and Lily turned Vampires is an interersting one, but this first chapter shows that your fic is not for me, first your M.C is ALL over the place he's confident and sexy then he's shy and dumb blagh, good luck count me out

Interesting story. I have to say it's unique and I would like to read where you take this in future. Good Work.

cool start looking forward to reading more and seeing what happens next

good start hope u develop it more

good

Great job, exiting and interesting.

Hope read you soon and thank you for all the time spent made this chapter.

Greetings

Nice chapter ,update as soon as possible

I just feel disappointed that you, Author, are a Granger lover.

I feel like you have wrote some other fic I enjoyed but I can't quit place it