Reviews for Touch
chdh1 chapter 1 . 7/30
So so beautiful!
Ireneff chapter 1 . 7/29
Beautiful!l
quietbeautie chapter 1 . 7/28
really good!
raffertysdonna chapter 1 . 7/28
the way you lay out your stories and make connections is so beautiful. i love that it's not always the traditional way of writing but you make it your own and ugh just stunning work as always. imma go cry, i love that quote.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
Nice
Lifeislikethis chapter 1 . 7/27
Wow, this was so incredibly beautiful, you have such a stunning way of writing, this is just so perfectly them.
Gemmathompson chapter 1 . 7/27
Wow, beautiful writing!
Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 7/27
This was beautiful I loved it!
nikkaq chapter 1 . 7/27
I JUST WANT TO CRY BECAUSE THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFUL. I felt how much their connection is, how strong it is but it's transformed into gentle touches. AAAAAHHHH I LOVE THIS
takeyourside chapter 1 . 7/27
WOW! JUST WOW LUISA! this is PERFECT. the way you write it and the language you use is breathtaking. it was like reading poetry. a beautiful poem. good grief, i’m struggling to find the words to describe how great it is. and this line!

‘This realization usually hits Donna when the light catches Harvey a certain way, with a golden tint they only get at home’

OH MY GOD THAT LINE! WOW WOW WOW.

i’m so happy you wrote this, it’s melodic
catskeye chapter 1 . 7/27
Just beautiful
Sanjukta Mukhopadhyay chapter 1 . 7/27
"In those moments they don't smile, or talk, or laugh, they just feel each other's breathing, let their bodies make up for all sorts of lost time." I mean I read this lines 4 times in a row,this is truely mesmerising ,I am speechless
babzfgm chapter 1 . 7/27
Wow.
Absolutely beautiful.
Amazing, incredible 3