Wow! This is amazing. Your world building is excellent! Thank you!

I so hope to see this continue.

amazing story, can't wait to get more

Amazing story. I have to admit that beginning this story I thought this might be like the hundreds and hundreds of other fics where Harry is all powerful and holds all titles... but I held on.. and wow. I love this story. I will favorite and follow. I only hope the next chapter is almost ready.

I do have just one question concerning James and his knowledge of his lineage. Ghost James told Harry that he was not sure if his father (harry's grandfather) knew about his true lineage and in turn he admitted he also did not know but the king goblin admits to Harry that James' father was just about to take role as king only to be obliviated by Dumbledore.

That in itself makes sense but James is dead now. Therefore he would know due to the obliviation not carrying out even after death. It makes no sense that James would not know. He knows so much more but he never knew if his father actually knew? It implies he still does not remember.

I guess you can say James was too young to remember but maybe not.

ohh mannn that last one got me,that's not a dragon! , that's a planet with wings!hahahahahahahahhaha

Oh I absolutely love this story.

Maybe the baby that was lost in Hermione was not Rons but Harry's but done with out ether knowing about it, after all if Dumbles wants Harry Dead then his unknown off spring who would be under Dumbles complete control would be the next king and no one would know it if the baby was suppose to be removed from Hermione and switched to a surrogate woman to carry.

awesome story with some really intriguing twists...
eagerly waiting to read more :)

Very nice, although having it all in 1 chapter is a little weird. Please continue!

Please please continue very soon

This is an AWESOME Fic. Easily now one of my Favorites! I love the tie-in with Merlin, the ways of teaching from Arthur, Gryffindor, and James. I really enjoy the description of the magic "rolling" out when Harry was angered. Olivia is a great character that makes up qualities of Harry, and areas of Luna/Hermoine/Ginny.

I can't wait to see how Harry deals with the government, Dumbledore, and the Heirs. How many chapters do you forsee for this Fic? If you write long ones like these then I can see this in my top 10 fics that I truly want to read over and over.

Great Job! I won't bother you about asking when you will submit another chapter as I know it bothers some authors. I REALLY want to, but I won't. Thank you for sharing this vision for a story!

You really really should consider splitting this up into smaller chapters. As it is, it's probably completely broken on mobile browsers, but even on desktops anything above 20k per chapter (on ffn layout) is rather unwieldy.

You've been taking this down, enlarging it and putting it up on multiple occasions.

Why don't you split it up into chapters instead and update the chapters as you go

Awesome. Can’t wait for the update.

please MORE

MORE, MORE MORE! I've been an avid reader of your work for a while. but this might just be the best I've ever read.