Another great chapter! Glad Owen and Barry managed to get the raptors calm, though the new alarm will have ruined that. Good that all the unneeded employees and the investors were brought inside out of the way. Good that Owen, Claire and the others watching the camera footage noticed the shadow that's possibly a person, as well as the raptors watching something. Hope they'll all be okay. Looking forward to finding out what happens.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Seems to me that someone is there to cause trouble or it actually could be a dinosaur actually native to Sorna and that the reason why the raptors are going crazy is because it's another raptor.
Anyway I'm liking this story so far. Since you said it will be much shorter it makes me wonder if it will be finished in time for when Camp Cretaceous gets released. Looking forward to that series.

Another good chapter! Glad the tour went well enough (before the alarm at the end), and that the investors seemed happy. Glad Claire was able to handle them despite her occasional annoyance at them, and agreed with her about being glad Owen didn't hear some of the things they said. Felt bad for Owen for feeling the need to hide and then not being able to escape getting involved. Curious to know what's going on at the end that triggered the alarm.

Good chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Enjoyed the rest of this chapter! Felt bad for Claire fir all the extra scrutiny she's experiencing, and the issues caused by Simon's appearances. Thought the idea Claire proposed was a good one, and I'm interested to see how that may go here. Felt bad that Simon's suggested timeline means that Claire and Owen will miss their days the following week. Hope that tour goes alright. Enjoyed their conversation in the final scene, and loved how they're both doing better with the way they react to bad news from each other.

Great start! Looking forward to the next update!