Reviews for At The World's End
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26
I read your post in your tumblr and thank you very much .Unfortunately I don't think i will be able to write a fic because well i,m not a writer,i cannot write good dialogue or write in a way that will be appealing to a reader .My review was mostly to give ideas of how the story could be done better and maybe even give the inspiration to rework the fic in the future .But if you want the premise done justice I encourage to give it a second try,or if you want to of course,to commission much more capable writers than I .Mugen7 or apprentice trashmen for example .They have written fics that I enjoy immensely and from what I saw they stay mostly on character .I do see them executing the premise and my idea much better that I could ever done.

That's my response about your invitation to write my own fic,plus I want to preserve my anonymity from the internet .I don't really use social media if you haven't guess. I wish you good luck!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
A cool scene that is more accurate to his character would be Terumi transforming into his true form and beginning to brag to izanami about his awesome power and the fact that he managed to gain sentience on his own while Izanami is just a slave,bound to Origins will and now just a tiny piece of a doll .He would begin to scold her about her so called ''pride''.He will state that drives are the materialization of ones desire and since Desire in the blazblue world is the genesis of a soul,izanami cant be considered an individual or a person because her wants,personality traits and even her love for Ragna aren't her own they are that of the Origins .He will claim that they aren't nor they ever were equal .For he is his own individual being with his own desire and dreams while she is nothing but a lie fabricated by a scared little girl .He would then accuse of Her being the false god between them,for he is a true god and clearly divine in origins while Izanami is just an offshoot of mortal made garbage and thus she is even lesser than trash and a sad existence like her doesn't deserve to be called a god.

He would then proceed taunt her until she will fade away .Telling her about how he is going to absorb noel,how will destroy the master unit finally killing the Origins,how he will destroy every remnant of his past and ascend to a being even greater that Amaterasu. That he plans to destroy the old world ad create a new one,where he will rule,he will the one and true god .He tells her that this new world will be basically his personal playground and its people would be his toys and they're only purpose in life would be to serve him and satisfy his vulgar tendencies .Then he promises her that he will give her beloved Hero special treatment,he will condemned him to an endless cycle of pain,suffering and despair, an infinite death loop where he would be forced to die painful deaths for all eternity and since all the piece of the Origins managed to piss him off,he would make them including her to watch their dear big brother die for all infinity,unable to help him and he will revel in their despair,he would finally be happy. Before izanami can faint completely Terumi gives her a final message,even if Rags manages to destroy him it would not matter for a true god never dies,he WILL CAME BACK!

so ahh that ended up longer that expected but what to do you think,do you like my ideas?.I also I don't think Terumi is dead, he is to popular of a character to kill off permanently. So I imagined that alongside Ragna he will return to a future blazblue game.
Niphilim chapter 1 . 7/23
While I found the idea itself intriguing and refreshing, I would sooner see Terumi remain silent or carry on with his typical devil-may-care attitude than act out against Izanami in such a way. I don't see in what continuity would Terumi at all care what Izanami has to say to such a psychologically-scaring degree. At worse he would kick her like he did Rachel back in Continuum Shift but that's about it.