| Reviews for The Upside of Heartbreak |
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Cadet staff-srgJAG19 chapter 3 . 22h Just one question, What Ram does Dagur have? |
Yubel578 chapter 3 . 23h That was hilarious! Also as a side note to ruff and heather about getting the details from astrid, all I have to say is this. If she can even speak after Hayden is done with her. Lol. Take that snotty! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/28 Yes, awesome chapter! Thank you. |
Superlego99 chapter 2 . 7/23 I love that you have a side story going on, it gives me more to read! :D In all seriousness I love this already and can't wait to see where this goes. As for Snotface, I feel that it's a combination of him cheating on Astrid, while also being too drunk to notice. Being Snot, he's going to fight to try and get her back in someway, likely while still seeing Sabrina but who knows. All I know for sure is that just and Dagur and Hiccup said, the car is indeed the sex machine and a pantie dropper. Have a wonderful one! ~SL99 |
HeartAngel1796 chapter 2 . 7/23 I like this a lot. Very well written, dialogue is great, and I am excited to read more. Scott is definitely not going to let Astrid go. Especially after he finds out that the guy he 'lost her to' was his cousin. Mostly out of pride I think. Excellent work, can't wait for next chapter ;D |
Now Account chapter 2 . 7/23 Hahaha, the two “rich assholes” had blocked her in. That was foreseeable. I can totally picture a grumpy Astrid almost seating herself on Hiccup’s lap! A quite funny scene! And Hiccup follows it up with some distinctly ‘Hiccup’ charm. In a way Astrid is right: Hiccup is not one of those rich assholes because he may be rich but he is not an asshole. The chemistry between them is obvious. Haha, the banter is awesome in here, too! Do I get the feeling Astrid likes the boys’s cars and just speaks snidely of them out of anger (and maybe a bit of jealousy)? “extremely drool-worthy cars” I love how everyone is setting Astrid and Hayden up and Astrid is trying to convince herself she doesn’t want it (him :P) Astrid likes it that Hiccup knows and appreciates her ‘Beetle’. No denying. Hiccup’s reaction is so funny! And totally reasonable, I mean he knows his cousin and got to know Astrid a little bit. Love at first kiss… Hehe, Snot is pissed and maybe now realized his mistake. Picture a short, drunk Snot about to go over to Hiccup when two tall, broad, muscular, and menacing men go up to him and ridiculing and threatening him. And the look on his face! And the part with the condoms! I burst out laughing at that. They all teasing Snot :D Dagur is awesome! They are all just playing with him! I love it! Imagine being hammered enough to not recognize your cousin… probably a good thing or Snot would never let him live that down. Obviously Snot wants Astrid back. He just was (is) a moron. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/22 Wow, thanks for the fast update. Fantastic story! |
atomicsub927 chapter 2 . 7/22 I'm waiting for the car scene. Though try not to rip off titanic too much |
Angelica chapter 1 . 7/22 OOOOOOOOOH. IM SO EXCITED. Awesome to see something different from you! I’m looking forward to this! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22 Looks interesting and is well set up. Looking forward to more. Thank you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22 Omg you're making another story! Woo! So excited as I LOVE your writing! How long do you think it'll be? |
razor95 chapter 1 . 7/22 Really start to the story here. loving the backgrounds and relationships set up with every one here and the fun circumstances that will bring them all together. just wanted to ask. does Hiccup's and Dagur's parking job mean Astrid's tiny little beatle is trapped between them? would love the relationship progress over astrid shouting at whatever douchebags have blocked her in only to find out its smart sexy hiccup! what fun! |
Now Account chapter 1 . 7/22 I‘m gonna be honest because I know I can be with you: When I first saw the notification I thought it was an early update of TWoB and when I realized it wasn’t I was quite disappointed. But as I read it I quickly got to like it. By now I should not even be surprised, one just has to love your writing. Well, things are rare ever perfect (for long)! I like the background you created for Astrid and also the fact that you didn’t make Snotlout a total ass, because confident and independent Astrid otherwise probably wouldn’t have dated him. Also like Hiccup’s background, still seems very in-character to him. And I love Toothless! However, I have something to nag about: IMO a chameleon paint looks far better when it consist of two shades of paint! (not black) Though I have only ever seen one in person (sort of yellow&orange) and that was some years back. ‘FormaCar’ is a pretty awesome app for mobile where you can configure cars and they have chameleon paint, too. I absolutely love red&pink and lime&yellow. The Venom GT is f****** awesome! What an amazing machine! I am so hyped for the F5! *dreamy look and sigh* “The first three Venom F5’s are currently in production and testing will begin in Q2 2020. The base price for the Venom F5 is $1.8 million and Hennessey is only building a total of 24 examples, 12 for the American market and 12 for international markets. US allocations are close to being sold out. The Venom F5 will make its official debut at The Quail during Monterey car week in August of this year.” ~from Hennessey’s website Okay okay, fanboy mode is over now… :P I have to say, I really like the setting and I love this story already! |
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 1 . 7/21 Nice |