It would be interesting if the boys know Rory is pregnant. They always had a soft spot for reporter hirl

I think Rory’s statement he didn’t want me. Tells Rory’s broken heart to the fullest. Hopefully she will finish Stan. Get it published and make a name for herself and provide for her baby. Anxiously waiting for more

Aw poor Rory! This is sooooo good! Can't wait for more, loving this! HA I agree with Lorelai, mash and french fries are a good match hahah.

Hooray for having friends like Paris - I mean that: she told Rory and now the band aid as been ripped off - and like will go on. (Logan was a slime, just like Christopher! Maybe even worse - he knew he was going to get married, but he kept up a relationship with Rory. She is not innocent, but I guess she thought he might pick her. I am glad that he got married.) Now Rory can really begin to move on, that chapter is over. She has "Stan" and I hope she continues to develop a true and deep relationship with her editor! The thought of Luke out digging a grave is funny (to me, anyway). And Luke knows about babies and heartburn. Man, a great guy! Good for both Rory and Lorelai. Good chapter. Thanks so much. More when you can.

Not to be picky, but its a well written story and, as Stephen King says, editing is a must: teenage boyss heads dont smell well. Its a cute idea recognizing the shampoo, but farfetched. For a reason they mock Logans. Thanks!

Like the honest conversation Lorelai and Rory had - with the definite that Lorelai and Luke are 100% there for her, anytime. But the best part for me, is the open and clear communication between Rory and Jess. They simply click, so much in common. Good decision to avoid working on the book with Jess in the Hollow. Oh, I can so clearly see Miss Patty and Babette hanging over Rory's shoulders, to get the scoop, to try to have her change things to way more tawdry - they can be great fun, but their style is not her style. And, Jess, he is a meticulous editor - so it is wise that Rory stay with him. And yes, I don't think that the story is over - when Rory says she doesn't know how to end it. Hope that there is lots and lots of Jess and Rory together. Thanks so much. More soon please.

Keep it coming! Good start, liked the idea of Rory and Jess working together. :)

I like it so far! I'm looking forward to whatever comes next!

Enjoying the start, looking forward to see where it goes!

Great start! I can't wait to read more!