Nice story you got hope to see more

Very good can't wait for more

Great chapter - looking forward to the next update. You might want to change the second paragraph as it has Jason as being Thalia's half sister which I assume you mean half brother.

Perfect and update soon please

That’s definitely a lot like the story from the goosemaster with the same idea more or less same domains and also thalia as his daughter.
I have no problem with that as long u don’t plan on completely coping his.
Als I would like if u don’t use that idea with the primordials.
That’s not really Percy Jackson anymore but more of a fight between overpowered idiots and not that interesting anymore
Bye
Yesse

Three chapters in such a short amount of time? You're spoiling us. Don't stop.

U update again.
Holy **** that was fast.
Nice and I’m looking forward to read the next chapter.
Please don’t write the complete lighting thief again. That would be maybe boring without changes.
Jason quest will be interesting though.
Bye
Yesse

Perfect and update soon please

Nice update!
I hope u won’t use Perseus vs. corrupted overpowered Zeus, (goosemasters idea)that’s not Percy Jackson anymore and kind of boring.
1285ws are pretty good for an update and that u also use the romans is a good idea.
But maybe u should use another roman form.
Somnus is the roman form of Hypnos, god of sleep.
Bye
Yesse

can't wait for more

Fucking hell this update scheme is awesome. I'm waiting for Zeus to get fucking dismantled and hopefully fade.

Zeus is a dick.
But that’s nothing new.
Good chapter

I love stories like this.

By the gods this is a grand start. I can't wait for the next chappy.

This was good until the final paragraph on the first page, just a lil cringe