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Guest chapter 8 . 7/29 Man, this was an emotional chapter! I loved seeing Mindy come out of her shell and just be herself and free! It really hits hard especially how when you are older, you forget yourself and are confined by the struggles of adult life. I also think you got Peter right too, as it would make sense he would be angry at Mindy fro growing up, despite it being inevitable. It makes sense for his character as he never wants to grow up and accept that his friends will always change. I cannot wait to see where this goes next for Mindy and Peter, character-wise that is. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25 Hi! It’s great to see this story updated again! I really love it. This is an exciting first adventure for Mindy! I really do love her wit, sarcasm and energy as a protagonist. I do wonder why we relived the First Peter Pan film. I wonder if all the Disney lands are like this in this world. Anyways, can’t wait to read more and see where Mindy & company go! |
Sailor Luck chapter 6 . 7/23 It’s well written and the idea is interesting, but the main character is... really unlike able. I mean you don’t have to make her good hero but I honest don’t see anything that makes her redeemable I mean Scarletts mean to heck she sometimes fells parent life sucks so be mean and bitter. Heck, when she jokes it’s kind of rube. I mean you can maker different from her old self but you make her have more like able trait cause so far I just hate her as a person. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/21 Hi, I wanted to say that this is a really well-written story. I especially enjoy the concept of a protagonist who’s forgotten their past as a hero, especially when they were a five year old adventuring Princess across all the Disney realms! I cannot wait to see Mindy meet her friends and enemies in the Disney realms, especially with the fact that she doesn’t know what her specific relationship was like to the characters. I also wonder what her reaction will be to the newer Disney characters, considering the fact that she supposedly did not meet them through not seeing their movies and that she left before their movies came out. It will be a fascinating journey to read as she rediscovers her family, friends and herself. Can’t wait to read more! |