Reviews for The First Shadowbender
Karsap chapter 1 . 14h
Wow nice job hope there's a RenxTy Lee.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
Okay despite Ren traveling with team Avatar please for the love of god no matter what don’t have him cave and teach shadow bending to Aang have Shadow Bendinf be unique in that it’s the one element the Avatars will never have and they can’t even learn it in the first place

Anyway hope it’s a harem with Katera, Toph, Suki, Azula, Ty Lee, Mai, June
Masked Freak chapter 1 . 7/21
Honestly, interesting. The only thing in this story now that needs to be explained is how shadows are an element.
Pinkflamingwarriorofjustice chapter 1 . 7/22
Hey cloud, listen I have got a GREAT idea for you. You know how the eclipse stops fierbending? Well why don't the eclipse also encrisses shadowbending a bunch of times, giving them the edge to escape and stuff, as well as ren using shadowbending to safe uea from being the moon while still being able to fully use shadowbending, as well as she falling in love with him instaede of sokka (or not) and June (the bounty hunter lady) going team avatar as one of his many lovers and a new shadowbender as well as uea too pals. As well as Tai Lee too pals.
Sincerely yours, Mr. P.
sonavelkovskaa5842 chapter 1 . 7/21
Автор это очень интресно. Мне очень понравилось. Особенно с тенями. Интресно, откуда у него. Автор желаю, вам удачи, вдохновения и здоровья. Вы молодец :)
TheBeatles211 chapter 1 . 7/21
Once again you’ve caught my interest with another new story. I’m really interested on who(or what) the woman that gave Ren the shield is. And I’m also curious on whether or not this shadow-bending is at all related to Vaatu. Also, I haven’t asked this before but I recently became curious about it. You’ve made a lot of great OCs with interesting designs and personalities throughout your stories, but I was wondering on what you think they would sound like. What Voice Actor best matches the voice you hear in your head when your OCs are talking? I’m really interested in hearing your response. Anywho, I wish you good luck with your writing and I hope to see the next update soon. And remember to stay healthy and to stay safe.
Kamen Rider W chapter 1 . 7/20
That is an interesting thing to do with an avatar story and are u gonna pair Ren up and if so I would suggest Toph because she’s great
Clockworkskull chapter 1 . 7/20
Amazing work please continue!
PirateLord93 chapter 1 . 7/20
When Ren immobilized the bandits I thought Shadowbending would just be a rip-off of Shadow Possession Jutsu from Naruto, but I see its completely different. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out, and learning about Ren's encounter with the Fire Nation.
BeastHunter01 chapter 1 . 7/20
I like this new story. A lot of it seems funny. I wonder what Zuko’s reaction will be when he sees shadow bending for the first time.
masters123lfm chapter 1 . 7/20
Ohhh Nice a serious but also funny guy. I like this kid already. I can see him as Rogue from fairy tail. And also I can see him and Toph getting along so well :3 nice start let’s see how you will develop the future chapters of it X3
WilliamLeonis chapter 1 . 7/20
Ok this is a little diffrent but keep it up!