Reviews for Heroes United: Unlimited
RandoFox chapter 1 . 7/24
The spelling and grammar is quite bad, maybe focus on fixing that.
NotLeviathan chapter 1 . 7/22
Seems... formulaic. Maybe branch out, do you own thing. Kinda just reads like infamousmuffins story but with rex and a more jolly ben. Hopefully it doesnt just become a retelling.
Shack459 chapter 1 . 7/20
I hope will have many girl love ben
Story Artist chapter 1 . 7/20
Really great start for an awesome story! I am looking forward to seeing how this story goes. I can't wait to see what Ben and Rex do in JL.
I do however, believe that Stargirl is the wrong Ben, here. She just has such an attitude and is super jealous of, well Supergirl. I won't recommend Supergirl, since it's been done a lot. But, I figured that he would be paired with a girl he could relate to.
I would strongly recommend Shifter! She is a shapeshifter, like Ben. With Ben turning into aliens, and Shifter turns into dinosaurs and animals. And she calls out her transformations like Ben does. And she wants to be a hero like Ben!
I also feel bad for Shifter and the other Ultimen, and I know that Ben can use his watch to save them! Imagine what they could do if they join the League! And the team-ups she would have with Ben. And imagine how awesome their children would be in powers and looks.

PLEASE, high recommend pairing Ben with Shifter instead of Stargirl! Shifter is NEVER used, even though there is massive potential with them! Please at least consider Shifter for Ben.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
Great story so far keep it up
AUfan62 chapter 1 . 7/20
Looking forward to more honestly
Julian 10 chapter 1 . 7/20
Awesome please update soon