Interesting story so far but you got to read what you type there are several mistakes as well as times you put he\she said even once you they scream you misspelled Loki and some of your sentences seemed clipped I hope you update soon and clean up this first chapter

hello leonardo, this crossover is gonna be really good. i really can't wait for the next chapter

stay healthy and bye bye.

ps: natsu is a big idiot xD