| Reviews for Mortal Reminder |
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B123 chapter 1 . 7/25 Wow this is top tier gold fanfiction right here! This is the kind of Infinite Stratos fanfiction that I’ve been looking for. Can already see that you know of the latest info regarding the series from either the wiki pages or directly from the current light novel. From what I’ve gathered in this, it seems that the scientists that created the Orimura siblings either didn’t stop when Tabane was discovered or that they simply restarted “Project Mosaica” on there own, as well as maybe perfected it too. This would also explain why Madoka is like she is now, fully realising now that she’s a imperfect and obsolete specimen, even more so if there are going to be more Orimura siblings coming out of the woodwork. I also like how Ichika is fully realising it too that he and his sister are not exactly a “normal family” but is better composed and maybe excepting that he isn’t for awhile now, which I find refreshing to his character and it brings the classic trope that family isn’t just born but made through the bonds that they make themselves. I’m Hopeful that Ichika will continue to reach out to Madoka and officially make her part of the Orimura family, whether Chifuyu will except her is another story that I hope you will later tackle on in this. I’m also wondering how the harem girls will react to Madoka being at the academy or more so being near Ichika. Lastly to say that I’m definitely keeping an eye on this and I’ll also spread the word to some of my friends who are IS fans also. So definitely hope to see more soon. |
AnAce0fSpades chapter 1 . 7/20 An interesting premise and a touch of mystery. I will be watching where this story goes. I agree with AnUbIs, the dialogue seems very genuine, that is a particular area many a fanfiction fail in. |
AnUbIs chapter 1 . 7/19 Great start, flawless and perfect. The suspense at the end was perfect. Also the interactions between ichika and madoka are very well scripted, they seem like actual real people talking. Also i find it funny how ichikas mind projects the word girlfriend into girl who is my friend, i found that amusing. |