Again, I am impressed by your abilities in both writing a good story and catching the characters perfectly. Don't try to add to this, it's already a complete story by itself.

Wow... you can write so well! I loved this piece aswell! please, carry on writing! wow... 0.o

Thank you for telling me but im makeing a new story to replace my first one so look for it later -

So sad and bleak...good old Kurt, so full of faith, even when darkness is consuming everything around him. I loved it. Very good. I think Storm needs someone to show her what it is to be loved. Maybe that could be your next chapter?

Very nice.

~Carrie

Oh . . . this one gives me shivers. You do so well at writing Kurt's faith, and Ororo's bitterness and doubt.

I applaud your ability to bring these characters to life. And I must certainly say that I hope you'll continue . . . perhaps something to do with what happens "after the dawn", as it were?

I for one am looking forward to more from you!

Skybright Daye

PS: “…perhaps we are only vaiting for the sun to rise, and do not know the hour of the dawn.” Oh yeah, that's goin' on the quoteboard!

No Kuroro? ;_; Oh well, anything with Storm and Kurt is usually a good read, even if it's not a romance . . . P

Wow, nice. I love how you write these things and hope you write more. Was quite good. No criticism here. _ I like how you kept them in character and wrote so well, without making it some form of romance. Ok, so some people could say it's 'implied' romance. . . P

Ah, hello again - I LOVE your writing...*sniff* So sad, but Kurt is so cute... Normally I avoid such depressing stories, but this one...*sigh*