Amazing job with this fic. I love getting to see the first movie through Zevon's point of view.

I love how supportive Zevon is even if he is somewhat apprehensive and cautious about Zed liking a human. The moments between Zevon and Zed talking about Addison make for really sweet father/son moments and it's nice to see the type of relationship they have. It's really nice to see the change in Zevon's viewing of Addison and how he can see she really isn't like most Seabrook humans after what she was willing to do for Zed and zombies in general.

It's also really nice to have some moments from the movie that were skipped over filled in.
-CrazyHayniac

Zevon is one of the coolest movie dads ever. Thanks for writing about his support, love and guidance towards his children and how supportive he was of Zeddison

Welcome back to writing! You did a great job with your first story back. I could see all the scenes playing in my head as I read this. I hope you wrote more. You are very good. I can’t wait to see what you do.

& may I say you picked a GREAT proofer/title page creator. Quietly has proofed all my stories & done title pages for me as well. She is very gifted. She’s also my #1 cheerleader. I have a feeling she’ll be yours too. (If it’s not obvious, I cannot rave about her enough, haha).

So insanely proud of you! This was such a great idea to explore and you did an amazing job capturing the relationship Zevon has with his children. Thank you for allowing me to be a part of this! Looking forward to your future stories!