this was incredible! it was so vivid! i could see everything and i could feel the urgency, and the fight/violence scenes were really clear! i'm jealous, i want to be able to write fight scenes that good! and the realism you showed, with how badly drakken was hurt and that real world villains aren't just KP villains... shego being willing to just kill the guy...i can't decide if that means she just wanted to get rid of him, or if she saw the potential future threat he was and was eliminating it preemptively.

an awesome scar origin story... and i loved the little touch of caring at the end with drakken worrying about shego, and the henchman adding that she also cared. great picture of the start of their partnership!