Reviews for The Devil's Twin
shirik chapter 1 . 7/23
this was great but i can't wait for the getting in bed together scene
Rose chapter 1 . 7/22
God this is really good I can’t wait for season 5 as well.
bossyshort chapter 1 . 7/20
Good job! I especially loved your Michael pretending to be Lucifer. You displayed really well this twist between acting like Lucifer, but still behaving different.
Interesting motives for Micheal's actions, I can understand him to some extent, doesn't justify his actions or hate for Lucifer though. I liked the character you created. And I am curious to see what the show's Michael is like.
To put everything in a nutshell: Your first Lucifer Fic is great work.
Blondie 20000 chapter 1 . 7/19
Thanks for the review SPCLjmm yeah I have been told before about the scars I couldn't remember if they went. I got the scar idea from another season 5 fic so...not my fault :D Hey Chloe hasn't seen his back for a while and he cut his wings so many times so I was lost and I watched the eps ages ago.. it's fan fiction so yeah.
SPCLjmm chapter 1 . 7/19
Great story. One note: in the series Lucifer’s scars go away when his wings return. So that re Michael was a bit of a “huh?” Moment for me Fan fiction doesn’t have to matchjust pulled me out of the story for a bitkept reading n enjoyed except for that one thing
CastleExtreme chapter 1 . 7/19
Terrific story; creative and loved reading it!
Secretwrittenword chapter 1 . 7/18
I loved this. It would be an interesting twist to the show. Of course the detective would be able to tell the difference. So good.
JoanOver chapter 1 . 7/18
This was FABULOUS! I hope the episode is half as good
554Laura chapter 1 . 7/18
I enjoyed this a lot.
Izzyrosales chapter 1 . 7/18
Wow. Wow. Wow.
Cathy Sullins chapter 1 . 7/18
Very good
vrskaandrea chapter 1 . 7/18
Oh, good one. Love that back story of how everyone looks at Michael and sees Lucifer. Real good psychological play there.
Chloe really tried to talk to him, but he just wouldn't listen. Poor bastard. Loved this little one shot, for a first Lucifer fic it was amazing!
Wouldn't it be funny, thought, if Michael bleed in her presence too?