| Reviews for Accidentally in Love |
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MrRedSnake chapter 1 . 7/16 Off the bat, I absolutely love the fact that you said "named after the song from Shrek 2" instead of "the song by Counting Crows", that made me laugh WAY harder than I'd prefer to admit. Secondly, I appreciate that shoutout to my boy Pip, he's far to often overlooked and it bums me out. Now for my thoughts on the actual story! I really liked it, it had some funny lines and the concept of Kenny in a band is one I've been toying around with in my head for some time but could never figure out how to execute it well, I'd say you nailed the idea pretty well. The only real criticism I have lies with Kenny's death, you even stated it right in the text, it's illogical. A good Kenny death shouldn't just come right out of the blue, it has to have some kind of set up like any other joke. It doesn't have to make sense realistically but it has to have a reason. Overall, great job with this one! There's just one remaining problem though... WHERE ARE THESE KIDS GONNA FIND A BASSIST?! |