| Reviews for Cloudy Sky |
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   edwardilovebella chapter 3 . 7/22 I love this. I can't wait to read more. |
| 123 chapter 3 . 7/19 ) |
| 123 chapter 2 . 7/18 :D |
| CAD270895 chapter 3 . 7/19 more please |
| shunsuikyoraku 0131 chapter 3 . 7/18 I love the the new chapter |
| shadewatcher chapter 3 . 7/18 Sqweeeee! Finally someone who will actually care about her wellbeing! Cause obviously the Dursleys didn't and the magical side seems to only do the bare minimum! Can't wait to see what happens next! This should be interesting to say the least! XD |
| Mep101 chapter 3 . 7/18 Love it please continue with the great story! Love the caring Squalo! Is she a Cloudy sky? |
| vgamit2103 chapter 2 . 7/18 Good work |
| CAD270895 chapter 2 . 7/17 more please |
| shunsuikyoraku 0131 chapter 2 . 7/17 I can't wait to see what is next. |
| Outofthisworldgal chapter 2 . 7/17 I am not sure if it was but how old is Selene or do we call her Senshi? Also, will the Sky flame always come out so they will eventually find out? I am guessing that Xanxus is still frozen |
| shadewatcher chapter 2 . 7/17 *cackles* Figures that Senshi would be able to tell that Luss is actually a woman. And why would she be scared of Squalo considering half the craziness she's gotten up to in her life so far this would barely rate a 'meh' in the crazy meter. XD love it so far! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Akita-J chapter 2 . 7/17 Your fic is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work. The only advice I can give you is to try to invoke all the senses with your writing. It is one thing to tell someone how a character is feeling but if you show it through their expressions it turns a good story into a great one. But I can say for sure that you are doing a good job with your fic, I'm just being a nit picky, fussy, writing enthusiast. |
| foxchick1 chapter 2 . 7/17 I wonder how the others will react to Harriet/Senshi? |
| Mep101 chapter 2 . 7/17 Love this story please keep up the great work |
