| Reviews for The Custodian and the Sister |
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   A Simple Pilgrim chapter 1 . 7/20 An interesting start to the story, though I am still waiting for said 'sister' to arrive before I can really decide how I feel about it. |
| Jim chapter 1 . 7/16 Good start and nice character development. I hope you don't try to add a romance element though. There's no suitable characters and trying to force it would make the story seem immature. Looking forward to the next chapter... |
| NoblePlebian chapter 1 . 7/16 That is some gold here, great jop mate |
