RedHood123,

I would give your story 7 out of 10 for the creativity of this big crossover, but there does need to be some punctuation checking.

Anyways, what is your favourite Death battle story of mine by far, and what was your least favourite by far?

-DiamondPickle994

RedHood123,

I saw your decision to put each chapter in your stories, and it's fine with me. Anyways, out of all Death Battles I currently made, which is your favourite, and which upcoming Death Battle are you looking forward to the most?

- Diamondpickle994

Number 5: Deery with the fly encounter (c 1)
Number 4: Skunky trying to conquer fears (c 5)
Number 3: Kat Kool with the saxophone (c 7)
Number 2: Steve falling in the water (c 8)
Number 1: Morgana’s proposal (c 8)

Also, when Mr CC was talking about everyone in the epilogue, he didn’t say anything about the Critters. This was still great though

Well the story is now complete Diamondpickle994 you shall now make you're top five favorite moments from this story.

Okay, I’ll make a Top 5 when you’re done.

Also, I thought of alternative Death Battle puns Boomstick made at the end of the Battle:

Fox Vs Hazel: (If Fox won) Looks like Hazel was Out-FOXED. (If Hazel won) Looks like Fox was in a HAZE-L.

Skunk Vs Po: (If Po won) Po was just more than Skunk could BEAR. (If Skunk won) Po was the real STINKER in this fight.

Plankton Vs Dr Kamikazi: (If Plankton won): EYE didn’t expect Plankton to win. (If Kamikazi won) Plankton just KANT-IKAZI keep up with Dr Kamikazi.

Hamister Vs Goater: (If Hamister won): Hamister wasn’t KNIFE to Goater. (If Goater won) Hamister sure was BAAAAAAAAAD at trying to defeat Goater.

(Let me know your pun suggestions for the upcoming Death Battles for who you predict wins.)

(Examples:)

Pokémon Johto Starter Battle Royale: (If Meganium wins) Meganium kicked grass! (If Feraligatr wins) Feraligatr chomped it’s way to victory! (If Typhlosion wins) Typhlosion fired up the competition!

Hugo and Rita Vs Dylan and Dolly: (If Hugo and Rita win) Dylan and Dolly had to HU-GO from this Earth because Hugo and Rita Out-FOXED them! (If Dylan and Dolly win) Looks like Hugo and Rita we’re doomed to lose on the SPOT!

Johnny Bravo Vs Glenn Quagmire: (If Johnny wins) Looks like Johnny earned a BRAVO! (If Quagmire wins) I guess Johnny is Giggity Giggity GONE.

Mason Vs Franklin: (If Mason/Franklin wins) Guess you can say Mason/Franklin was a SHOOT-in for victory.

Hmm you want me to add Deadpool to this story Huh? Well looking back on when I wish I could.

I know a certain character you can add to this story that's bound to make this story funnier.

A certain character who has a history of breaking the fourth wall.

He is referred to as the Merc with a mouth.

He loves Chimichangas.

I think you know who I'm talking about.

To answer you're question Diamondpickle994 Evil Steve is a character made for this fanfic so no he is not a real character also Deery saying mustard fly french fly and shoo fly in that scene she was trying to say the right words.

So, is Evil Steve an actual character, or is he an original character?

Also, in the first chapter when Deery said: "Mustard fly French fly shoo fly" What was she trying to do exactly?

Also: Pro: Good use of other-dimensional characters. Con: Sentences require punctuation and grammar.