Reviews for After the New Dawn
sayianhund chapter 2 . 7/23
Um hello again wouldn't overwriting harry and hermione minds and bodies with Barry and cats destroy the memories of harry and hermione? Wouldn't their magic fight against this take over? Wouldn't the speed force and magic fight each other? I highly doubt and body should be able handle both forces. I'm trying give you a chance but they just seem more damaged with each chapter with none if anything anyone like about any of the four characters.
sayianhund chapter 1 . 7/23
Hi, I started out interested in your idea and curious where it would go. Now I'm not sure what to think as your story is listed as harry and hermione but really isn't. I also am very disturbed by your main characters as how do you not see them as evil. They created what amounts to mundane horcruxes and sent them into a new timeline to search out and still them bodies to take over. I'm not necessarily against a good dark harry potter and hermione Granger story but this ain't even that this is the memories of to other destroying them and taking over their bodies. I also don't understand how they made such small devices that would even be able to share memories not alone change someone DNA. Plus I thought the speed force was one of those things that had to choose you.
Starboomer chapter 2 . 7/21
The main thing I will say here is that Barry and Caitlin are villains in this story. They set up a circumstance that to save themselves they put their powers and minds into objects that seemingly, almost completely, rewrite the person that first uses them. That is not the actions of a hero, and doesn't feel like something that Barry Allen/The Flash would do. Now give someone their powers that was worthy and act as guides to the new user, yeah that is totally within the response that could be expected out of a hero.
TheNameOfARiver chapter 7 . 7/21
Here I am, grinning like a loon while reading the chapter and now vibrating in anticipation for upcoming ones

Xovers are fun!
Sakura Lisel chapter 6 . 7/19
Hey you called Eobard Thawnes relationship with Eddie Thawne wrong. Since it was Eddies future unborn kids who would have led to Eobard being born, it makes Eddie as Eobards ANCESTOR not his 'descendant'. Eddie is Eobards who knows how many great grandpa. *lol* a 'descendant' is what you call somebody who is born AFTER the current person which is what Eobard is in concern to Eddie not the other way around the way you have it phrased in the story. *lol* especially since Eddies unexpected suicide that never happened in the original timeline Eobard came from resulted in Eobard and every future kid/grandkid Eddie would have had be erased from history. *lol*
demonboy121986 chapter 4 . 7/18
great story so far, but if I could make a suggestion, why not is some way have Cisco and Ron merge. I know they are kinda opposite but they were also both kinda sidekicks.
George Cristian810 chapter 4 . 7/18
I dont like this story for one reason only . There are no harry and hermione . Only some who pretend to be him . Also ginny couldnt speak with harry like this before 4 year .
Arcanos chapter 1 . 7/18
Damn...I really was searching for MCU/ HP fanfic with Harmony pairing... but unfortunately, my MCU knowledge is restricted to the movies...

Maybe I'll read it someday after watching whatever else is out there... what is I by the way? Cloak and dagger? or Runaways? or something else?

LoL on my question
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 7/17
Wait why do they have something that has Kara in it? Did HER universe get destroyed too with Barryand Frosts? Why since she doesn't even live in the same universe as them sowhat happened in THEIR universe shouldn't have affected HERS. She probably would have just been cut off from them probably spending the rest of her life wondering why she never hears from Barry and everyone else she knows in Barry's world again. *lol*
TheNameOfARiver chapter 2 . 7/16
Wow that was literally The Fastest Update! Glad you kept Thawne with Wells' face. Really intrigued about the reincarnation of Kara though... Hopefully we'll find out soon. Thank you for such a good story.
TheNameOfARiver chapter 1 . 7/16
The story is insane! And I am loving this insanity! Wow what a plot! I wanted to write one along this line too but couldn't fabricate whole plot of character merging, again that was two years ago, back then the crisis didn't happen. You just merged two of my favourite characters and already doing them Justice. Love your work. looking forward to updates.

Please don't abandon this one if a few trolls snarl. This one is too precious.

I wonder who's gonna get the Heatvission...