I hope Harry is a ravenclaw, a neutral house, so he is not labeled "dark" or Dumbledore is breathing on his neck all the time. And about pairing... Susan, Fleur, I like Luna too. Thank you.

I love it! Thank you.

Okay, I've read through all three chapters, I'm enjoying the story so far. If I may offer a peace of advice, when I first started writing my first ever story on this site I made Harry totally perfect and gave him like all the founder vaults and stuff like that. Your Harry is fine so far but just be careful about how much you're going to give him.
Also you'll want to give him something that makes him stand out, like a sense of humor and or sarcastic jokes.
My only negatives about this story so far is sometimes I feel like this Harry is emotionless, I know you've said he's not so I will withhold judgment until you're able to produce more chapters. Also a lot of the talking feels rushed.
Now I'm not trying to take shots at you, I'm not the best writer in the world and this is all just an opinion. You can take it or leave it.
As for the positives the story is incredibly entertaining and does catch my eye in a certain way, you've made it clear that this Harry is smart and you've made it clear what type of Dumbledore we are supposed to look forward to. I like the fact that you've given him a phoenix, I think this story has a lot of potential and I hope you keep it up.
Anyway that's my review, since there was only three chapters I skipped through the A.N notes and am going to go back and read them when I have time since I have to go now. But great story and thank you for reading my stories.

I like this

Love it.

think harry should find out abuot his parents and will when goes to alley this will ruin old man plans and potter manor move asap. but up to you there nice idea of stroy .

If he's logic driven I guess he'll be going to be with Susan Bones more given the legal issues he will probably find himself in after a thorough research on his status and conditions and also given their orphan background it'll be easier to connect but I guess pairing should be held off until later years perhaps

Hagrid was in a rush under Dumbledore's orders so I think he should be unable to get everything he needs to get done but atleast get all beginner guides in the subjects and cultures that were never mentioned to him in the Hogwarts letter. Also Snape had a bitter long rivalry so he could be a bit animostic towards Harry who reminds him of James Potter but hopefully the snarling will be less when he shows more of Lily's intelligence or work ethics.

Wish the chapters were longer but good none the less. As far as pairings, i would like to suggest either Luna or Astoria

Great chapter! I think he should stay at the Dursley's till third year then have Sirius at some point that year be giving a trial and have the Potter's will read and Harry given custody to Sirius. I still think he should get a traceless custom wand but if you want get him an Ollivander's wand and wait till the summer before fourth year when hopefully Sirius will be innocent declared innocent and given custody of Harry and have him get Harry a custom wand then. I would like to see Harry have his own mage staff though, that would come in handy in his fourth year with the Tri-Wiz going on and going toe to toe with Voldy and his merry band of Inbreeds. Any idea on what house he will be in and who he will befriend? Looking forward to reading more of this fanfic, update soon!

Of to a good start but do change it up more if your doing it different. Have Harry pick up more books like pureblood manners and politics books, spell books etc. Have him be a natural at the mind arts and get him a custom wand in Knockturn Alley sometime after his shopping trip with Hagrid. Please sort him into Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, not the other two, especially Gryffindor. I think you should split them into different stories and change it up as well, make Harry more studious, cunning and talented with his magic. I find myself looking forward to reading this story, will there be lemons in the later years? I hope Harry gets with someone out of the norm like Lavender Brown or one or both of the Patil twins. Maybe Hannah Abbot or Susan Bones. Anyway looking forward to reading this story and seeing if Harry will discover his magic at an early age and experiment and gain a greater control and talent for wandless magic or begin his development at Hogwarts. Update soon!

Love it.
Please write more.