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Guest chapter 1 . 7/16 Whoops... i suppose i should really stop reviewing things in the dead of night... heh AS i was saying, my initial question stemmed from an appreciation for your enjoyable writing style. Since this is a young fandom, i was curious if you had an intention to take any of your works farther than a one-shot. That being the case, i completely understand not wanting to leave a longer story unfinished. After all, writing is only ever an undertaking worth dabbling in whenever you write for your own enjoyment foremost, there is no sense in continuing somthing that you have no further interest in (perhaps in a fandom that has lost its appeal). If you do decide to start on a full-length story and still have doubts, consider taking on a beta reader. Having someone to share the load of the writing process with regards to grammar and so-on can make quite a difference in how enjoyable it is to create somthing new (like and AU *winkwink*). On a lighter note, once again i enjoyed your latest one-shot. The dynamic between Michiru and Shirou is one of the main factors that drew me to the fandom and can be developed in so many interesting ways that i ended up where i am right now, browsing ffn. Also, In my opinion you have captured their personalities very well, if their dialog may have been a tad stiff (but hardly worth mentioning) With that, i take my leave May Clear Skies Forever Follow Your Travels, IgnisDraconi |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16 Ayo, tis me again First off id like to appologise for not actually reviewing your o ther one-shot, i was dead tired and apparently decided to be in an inquisitive mood. Regardless, i did enjoy it quite a bit. My initial question stemmed from |
JustARandomGirl chapter 1 . 7/16 XDXDXDXDXDXDXD Hilarious and adorable. Great job! |