Dont think Naruto need Sharingan really, I dont know the power scale but 9 bijuu is more than enough imo. You could mess around that aspect (i.e sand control, etc) rather than adding Sharingan.

Look Out Empire! IT'SS NINNJA JEEEEZUHS! But in all seriousness, I think the Rinne-tenseigan(Evolved from Neji's Byakugan, Ashura Six Paths Chakra, Hashirama Cells for Regenerating Arm, All Bijuu Chakra & Uzumaki Genes)would be better than a Sharingan.

hope to read more.

it would be funny if it turned out that Akane is long lost sister of Sasuke xD

I like this story continue please

Another one? *irritated sigh*

Will you people quit choosing Naruto to crossover with Akame ga kill, cause it’s pretty overused and its getting boring, there are few animes that’ll fit with it but you’re to oblivious to notice

Naruto has already arrived as showing who is in control, please continue I want to see how this story unfolds

Naruto wouldn't get caught by anyone, especially those from the Empire.

just a few points i would point out
Kurama can sense negative emotions and intents so he should of been able to sense Leone swindling before it happen even Aria right from the get go let alone near the end.
sage mode allows one to fundamentally smash mountains with ones physical strength so Akame should of had a concussion even if Naruto held back not a oh he hit me and shrug it off(not saying Akame is weak).
Naruto is The military leader of a large nation by rights he cannot join Night Raid that's treason even if he is going to help it has to be through a alliance or of a job variety.
but beside that good writing i'm now going to read the original as i haven't read it yet

Still needs a lot of work on grammar and sentence structure. Why would Naruto need a boost to go into sage mode. He wouldn’t need it. Why have you also kept where it says Tatsumi’s chakra is great. He doesn’t even have chakra and you can’t tell his chakra is great because of skill with a sword. Please read over and do again and take in mind that this is Naruto after the war he would be stronger than anyone in Night Raid and the empire.