| Reviews for When You've Lost Your Way |
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Bluenet13 chapter 1 . 23h I love stories that explore Clay's backstory and this one was perfect at that! I wasn't sure who would pop up down that hill but I sure wasn't expecting his grandad and it was such a welcomed surprise. I loved the glimpses we got of Clay's early family life and how it also reminded me to one of my favorite stories of yours, 'Little Boy Blue'. Clay's thoughts throughout the whole ordeal and the dialogue with his brothers upon his rescue were spot on and so easy to picture on screen! Also, thank you for writing Clay as a badass, saving his team, before it all went downhill, literally. I love Clay whump, but I also love our boy being competent and a damn good operator. Thanks for writing and sorry you can't be with your family right now. I live in the east coast and my brother is in Cali so I know how you feel. Hope you can see them soon! |
writeallnight chapter 1 . 7/19 Yaaaaaaaaayyyy! I love this! Clay whump and Clay feelings and all around delightfulness. I was so curious to see who was at the bottom of that hill, definitely was not expecting it to be Clay's grandfather! I love that you let him be a part of helping Clay find his way home! And of course I love that he's starting to fix things with Sonny first. That brotp needs a serious mend! Great story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18 I loved this! Very well written, and honestly I wish the writers would've taken Clay's storyline this way this season! I really hope he changes his mind about leaving the team just like Sonny did, and that he ditches Rebecca... not a fan of hers... Anyway, loved the storyline, great job! |
Liz chapter 1 . 7/16 Awwwww... I really loved your story. It was perfect. Thank you. |
missblueeyes63 chapter 1 . 7/15 LOVED this story. Wonderful. |
BGB chapter 1 . 7/15 I really enjoyed this story! So well written as your stories always are. I especially liked the way Clay is beginning to seriously question his relationship with Rebecca. I just hope the show writers feel the same way! He's way too good for her. Thanks for sharing. |
AZGirl chapter 1 . 7/15 Great job on this! |
Chgrgal chapter 1 . 7/15 What a lovely way to start a Wednesday along with the news that Seal Team was going back to it's 9 o'clock time slot which I'm personally very happy about. Fun story love where you took it hope the series goes this direction as well. |
kimber1461 chapter 1 . 7/15 I'd love to see this as an episode! So touching! |
chyron girl chapter 1 . 7/15 Great story! I always love when writers try to fill in some of Clay's backstory with his grandparents. And please, yes, let him end it with Rebecca. |
Irish1969 chapter 1 . 7/15 If only we could sneak you into the shows writer's room. ;) Perfection! |
JeaneneP chapter 1 . 7/15 Love that he contacted Sonny first! Great friendship! Amazing story! You’re an amazing, talented writer. Please continue! |