always expected someone to reveal this topic, betrayal. It's difficult, but in good hands), so go ahead and know that we believe in you! And yes ... what's up with Kim?

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON WITH DRAKKEN?

There were some parts of this that were so old Drakken, like the code he never changes and the “'You’d think you’d been carrying this tension for twenty years.' 'Sounds about right.'" And then he tells her he wants to kill her!? And somehow you make it all so seamless? I can't handle. I want to know how it ends!

And of course the attempted murder was Frugal Lucre. Just. Of course.

–N

This was quite the Earth shattering moment for Shego, this was quite sad, wow.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

darn that is a sad one. i like how complex the emotions are and how very human they all feel.

DID SHE JUST-

NO. YES? I'M S D.

Like, I always loved to believe that Shego and Drakken were morally ambiguous characters, especially as the seasons went on, so, like, I always headcannoned (at least) that Shego had a soft-spot of KP, but to then see her be this EVIL, OH MY GOODNESS. Don't get me wrong, I love this take, it's just a very jarring experience, lol.

Like, I screamed when Drakken told her to kill KP and then she actually goes and DOES IT? Wow.

I need to know what happens next. This story is just so compelling. I NEED TO KNOW!

Now we have "finally" left the happy go lucky world of the original series and went down a darker path. The Doc with the assassination favor on KP is truly evil. It is a welcome derivation from the common tropes of this show. No i kinda dont believe they are dead yet, but we shall see. Also the reason for his wrath was the "treason" or rather interruption of an earlier attempt on Kim Possibles life by Shego? Well it kinda makes sense if you are intending to paint your version of the KP universe in these grittier, darker colours. Keep it up.

My My, This is certainly interesting. I think i'm going to really enjoy reading the current chapters.

This woman. Is going to have. An actual heart attack. Jeez.

WHY CAN'T I HAVE THE WHOLE FIC NOW?

–N

Pistis... and darkness... and chaos ... OH MY! Uhg so dark... I mean I love your writing and I find this both captivating and enticing but I have so much fear that its going to make me do what it did last time... like I just... its definitely there again...

Holy crap! Amazing chapter, as always.

First offI want you to kill Kim Possible.” Major chills from that line. There are a lot of things I’d expect Drakken to say, but I did NOT see that coming. Drakken has HAD IT.

Second, I love that you mention Shego’s pain in her chest repeatedly, reminding us she’s really hurt and filled with guilt. You compare the stomach churning with having to commit murder to the pain in her chest of losing Drakken, and when I read that the pain in her chest outweighed the churning of her stomach I was SHOOK.
This was a very intense chapter. Looking forward to more, bcb

Well, I have the feeling Shego celebrated a little too soon, I mean Kim (and Ron) isn't easy to get rid of and if that's the case, not only Dr. Drakken won't take her back but the pain in her chest will get worse.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Yoo... this has been the most heart wrenching fix I’ve seen you write bcbdrums.
Holy...
Shit. I felt the anger and the sadness within them both... damn...I have no... eloquent words but... well done.

OMG THIS IS CRAZY! I love your writing, BCB. I'm thrilled to see what else you have in store for future chapters. That last fight between Shego and Drakken was so intense I could feel it through the screen. You a knack for writing dialogue that tugs at your reader's heartstrings. Looking forward to more!

LOOOVE this story! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Please update soon!

What the AHHHHHHH WHAT IS GOING ON? It's fine, my feelings wanted to be hurt like this, ok?

**Takes a minute just to scream**

–N