I must say sir, you are handling the story a new dose of mystery with the death of roman and a ruby that despite what she did goes on I think ruby realizes that despite the fact that the world is as black as the night she goes to follow until his last breath

Bonus points with Blake when Ruby uses Torchwick's death to intimidate Weiss into leaving her alone!

Does this mean that the team dynamics will change? At the very least her and Jaune's relationship should improve. any which way it goes, it promises to be interesting...

This looks interesting enough. Looking forward to where you take it.

Of course not everybody sees things yangs way. Most people cant commit sexual assault destroy a club and face no consequences.

Mate, this is great. What you have done here is a fine example of literary work. If you had to read this aloud, Shakespeare would turn in his grave.
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I love it! I can't wait to see later down the line this affects Ruby's character and how she perceives combat. Will she be too scared to fight because she's afraid of ending another life? Or will she become ooc and start to become accustomed to killing her criminal opponents?

I was totally not expecting Yang to be proud of Ruby by the end of this chapter. Thank you for subverting my expectations. Interested to see where you take this.

I like it. A good start worthy of being a small story itself. Do keep writing more of it please. It's a simple and pleasant concept. well paced writing backs it up.

A very interesting opening and premise. I can't wait to see what's next! Keep up the good work!