I really love the trailer rewrite. The action and pacing seems to come naturally for you. I have high hopes for the actual fanfiction. I always enjoyed the idea of a rewrite with better characterization and storytelling. I was just always too lazy to do so. I’m cheering you on

I am on this rewrite train (as long as Pyrrha survives lol). And yes, dialogue would be very mich appreciated.

Nice for your first story so far.

My gripe with canon!Ruby was how she outrightly refused to grow up and mature, still clinging onto her stupid naivety that the good guys would always win; the lack of maturing in her pipsqueak-like voice confirms that. I hope that in time you rob that black/white worldview of hers. And at least confirm outright if Summer Rose either died or is still out there somewhere, because RoosterTeeth still is baiting us in this one.