Wow incredible fic! I love the emotion it actually had me sniffing towards the end. You used your characters well. Nicely done you should write more VS fics!

Wow you're a brilliant writer! You wrote it perfectly. I'm going to add you to my favourite authors.

That was really profound, I loved it! Keep up the wonderful work :)

quite good - better than me

i liked it. you have a very unique way of writing!

Very nice. I love this whole fic, especially towards the end. The imagery of Lux's last moments, and the way her emotions and memories are described, is very cool. I haven't read a Virgin Suicides fic in awhile, but this one reminded me of just how great the story is, and captured it's bittersweet beauty perfectly. A very nice piece!:)