| Reviews for The Innocence of Daryan Crescend |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/12 The pee glows bright on the toilet tonight, Not a clean spot to be seen. A kingdom of potty trainers, And it looks like I’m the queen The stomach’s growling with this poop they keep inside. Couldn’t keep it in, Heaven knows they tried. Don’t hold it in Don’t keep that pee Use the toilet, and please lift up that seat. Whenever you feel You need to go, Please let me know! Let it Flow, Let if flow Can’t hold it back anymore Let it flow, Let it flow Try to keep it off the floor I don’t care How much time it takes, Let the fluids flow The mess never bothered me anyway. It’s funny how a diaper makes everything seem small; And the pee that once controlled me, Is now spewed all on the walls. It’s time to see what they can do To test my limits and break through No dipes, no wipes, no breaks for me It’s PEE! Let it flow, let it flow It’s time to get rid of dipes, Let it flow, let it flow, They just might see me cry. Here they stand, And here they spray Let the fluids flow! The pee drops flurry through the air into the ground, They missed the cue and now there’s pee stained footprints all around. My last nerve crystalizes like an icy blast, We’re never going back; The diaper’s in the past! Let it flow, let it flow Don’t forget to shake it off. Now let go, now let go No, your penis won’t fall off. Here I stand Any time of day; Let the fluids flow, That mess never bothered me anyway! H |
dakoolguy chapter 1 . 7/12 Add John Phoenix to this |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11 Wow. You killed a kid. Good job asshole. This story sucks. |
Azu Dazu chapter 1 . 7/11 Where are Emperor, Dakoolgay and John Peenix? BAD STORY! |
John Phoenix Games chapter 1 . 7/11 Good story. I bet trolls will start reeeeeing at it though, because they have accepted Machi Tobaye's propaganda. Just watch. The next review will be a stupid anti-Daryan troll/hater, i guarantee it. |