Reviews for Yu-Gi-Oh: The Little Merman
Future chapter chapter 7 . 8/4
Back in the undersea palace, no one was as comfortable as Yugi in his bed nor even asleep because everyone was out looking for Yugi. King Solomon paced the length of his chambers in worry before looking out of his window. Arthur returned from another search and swam up to his longtime friend with a report.

"Any sign of them?" Solomon asked, begging for good news.

"No, my friend." Arthur replied. "We've searched everywhere. We've found no trace of Yugi."

"Well, keep looking." Solomon commanded, his voice sounding angry because of his concern but it softened as he continued. "Leave no shell unturned, no coral unexplored. Let no one in this kingdom sleep until they're safe at home."

"Yes sire." Arthur bowed.

Arthur swam out of the room to relay the new orders, leaving Solomon to mourn the loss of his youngest grandson in peace. The sea king sat down heavily on his bed, believing that it was his fault that Yugi had disappeared.

"Oh, what have I done?" Solomon asked as he cried. "What have I done?"
Guest chapter 7 . 8/2
(Giggling): Baby brothers are so cute, like Yugi Muto and so are baby sisters.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/1
(Complaining to Anubis): Aw man, it could be more than only three days.
Future chapter chapter 7 . 8/1
Back in the undersea palace, no one was as comfortable as Yugi in his bed nor even asleep because everyone was out looking for Yugi. King Solomon paced the length of his chambers in worry before looking out of his window. Arthur returned from another search and swam up to his longtime friend with a report.

"Any sign of them?" Solomon asked, begging for good news.

"No, my friend." Arthur replied. "We've searched everywhere. We've found no trace of Yugi, Rebecca nor Malik."

"Well, keep looking." Solomon commanded, his voice sounding angry because of his concern but it softened as he continued. "Leave no shell unturned, no coral unexplored. Let no one in this kingdom sleep until they're safe at home."

"Yes sire." Arthur bowed.

Arthur swam out of the room to relay the new orders, leaving Solomon to mourn the loss of his youngest grandson in peace. The sea king sat down heavily on his bed, believing that it was his fault that Yugi had disappeared.

"Oh, what have I done?" Solomon asked as he cried. "What have I done?"
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1
(Mocking Yugi Muto): Are you not just a precious little baby brother?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1
(Smirking at Yugi Muto tauntingly): So that makes you a baby brother, does it not?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/31
Your? Actually, you mean you're, do you not?
PhatPandaPo23 chapter 7 . 7/31
I do, but now you should get some much needed rest so you'll have the energy for your daily life and when you get around to writing the next chapter. All in all excellent work.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/31
Thank you for this other chapter.
PhatPandaPo23 chapter 6 . 7/31
Oh man, Yugi is in trouble now, thanks to Rebacca. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the fantastic work.;)
Guest chapter 6 . 7/31
"Why don't you go tell my grandpa and my brothers? You're good at that."
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30
(Laughing): Look out, Yugi, your grandpa and your two biggest brothers are downright pissed off at you for your rebellion.
Future Chapter chapter 6 . 7/30
Yugi collapsed there and begun crying softly.
Future Chapter chapter 6 . 7/30
Solomon lost his wife, his son and his daughter in law, but he wasn't going to lose his youngest grandson, too.
Future Chapter chapter 6 . 7/30
Yugi gasped, "Grandpa, Yusei, Jack,"
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