Though the chapters are short I am interested in seeing where this will go.
Don't worry about the hate comments you're getting: PERSEVERE! Make a couple of mistakes and learn from them.
To the haters: have some respect. Were you any better when you started writing? It takes time with some people to think up their own ideas and to work out spelling errors.
Back to the author: One thing that has helped me is to write your story into something like Microsoft Word.

Look at this fucking dying archive. In the last few years the number of stories has dropped by about 400 becaue people deleted their accounts and stories faster than others could upload. So at least write something original and with quality, rather than shitting on this site's grave. Fuck you. And you know what? I don't care that you're going to delete this review. It just proves I'm right, but you don't have the balls to man up and stop writing this shit.
~-acrimony-~

I personally love your style. The length adds more suspense and horror into the mix.

Seriously? So unoriginal you base your shitty story off another series. At least add content beyond 100 words a chapter.

That’s terrifying

This is interesting, I look forward to what happens next. (Don’t worry about the title, I’ve done it too)

Oh no, Bdubs D: Excited to see the next death!

Even the title has spelling errors. Just give up.