Good for them: sorting through their feelings and talking like adults! Great, if anyone deserves to be happy it’s Chris.

Bad for them: it’s Edonia.

Nice amount of action and good, clear writing. I do love fever!confessions, it’s always fun to see what comes of them.

A fairly good chapter, despite some unnecessary drama.
How many chapters are you planning for the story?

I really like this! I hope you continue.