I was so excited when I saw this had updated. Ardyn’s panic and then annoyance was pretty funny to read as well. I’m really looking forward to Aerith’s reaction to being surrounded by strange men while she’s grasping the hand of one of them. Part of me also hopes she offers one of them “one date” as repayment. Anyways, as always I am looking forward to the next chapter!

This is so interesting so far and I really can’t wait to see more! Chapter one and I’m already hooked!

Hey, I like the vibe this has going for it. Looking forward to the next one!

it has an interesting start that's for sure, it has quite the potential to be a good story, until next chapter.