This was great. Love to see it continued!

You had me with your first few words, you hooked me. My only thought was, this story is going to be special. Please tell me that you are going to continue with this unique read? If so, my email address is :

Such a sad but hopeful story.

Nice.
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Tough but really good read. This darker world was certainly possible after the beach. But their connection is still undeniable even in this darker world. Well written and I like that this is a complete story. I'm perfectly fine with that.

Thanks for writing.

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Great job and I hope to see more stories from you soon!

This is a great story. I’ve always felt disappointed at the ending of the show, deciding they were over. This is the sad start to your story, but them being together was good to see, even if it wasn’t clear that there was a future. When he got off the train, my heart sank, but then at the end my feelings changed for the better. Quite a rollercoaster. Very well done. It would be wonderful to see what happens next & going forward, if you could. Thank you for this one.

Wow. That was really well done, good stuff.

I'm lost. Does Sarah remember anything? How much time has passed? Is Chuck an agent? Did Chuck guess her cover name? If this is the first time they've met since her memory loss the reaction to each other was underwhelming

Wow! That is a take on post finale that I haven't seen and it was so powerful. Clearly still in despair after years(?), Sarah no longer in his life. To see her in that place, of all places, to hear her, smell her. That had to be both elating and excruciating. Just when he thought his one chance of having anything with her again, even seeing her again, is dashed away, there she is. A peace offering; an olive branch to perhaps start anew. It wasn't fluff and rainbows, but there was certainly hope and I think that's all we can dream for. Well done!

Great story Amy! I wish you would of continued with this story and see where it goes. Thanks for writing it I enjoyed it.

Ken

Ah, the melancholy that is Charah and trains. Loved the way you build the surroundings and the atmosphere of our post job duo. Oddly it was nice to see them interact as equals but also as the same people we gotten to know them from the show, just a little more hurt, bruised and maybe a little wiser from the expirience. The way you managed to capture both POV and keep them in character for the story you wanted to say was awesome to read. You just have a certain panache when writing for Chuck that I always like to read your fiction. This one is one of your best IMO. Keep it up...

This will sound insane, but the reason I like stories like this (not the situation they find themselves in) is that it shows that the ending was ambiguous and the scenario you laid out is just as likely as them staying together. Also, If I'm reading between the lines correctly, Sarah's "appointment" is Chuck which leads me to believe she's ready to reconnect with him. Nice job!

Okay, first off I HATE the idea they weren't together after it was over, that being said...OMG you gave me all the feels and I MIGHT be crying (I am). Thank you for this. This is WONDERFUL! Just WONDERFUL! Thank you.

This story definitely was dark through out, but the hope at the end was great.