Hi again,

So far, I think your structure is just fine. It's your fic. You can structure it however youlike. :(

It's always so darn cute when big Maurice tries to make himself look nonthreatening. Of course, we who know Maurice know how non-threatening he is-that's an understatement. But I can see why it would make strangers nervous.

I adore Bad Ape. I don't mind him being introduced early at all if it means we get to know him a lot better.

Is Mama in this group of apes? Oh, I hope she isn't dead, but I have this sinking feeling... Can I put in a vote to save Mama, if she needs saving?

I feel like the biggest hipocrit in the world. Take one look at my own profile and fics and you'll know what I mean in an instant. LOL! But I'll say it, anyway. I hope you can update soon. I can't wait to read more!

OMG, this is very very good!

I admit I might be a bit prejudiced because any fic that starts out with a healthy dose of Maurice gets my atention right off the bat. If he is well written it grabs my attention even more. But this first chapter is a good one, and you ended it on the perfect note, too.

I was a little surprised when Caesar let Maurice take the lead, but I like it.

It looks like the baby might have the virus?

I say please do continue this, please?

Now I have to go and read more.

Laughed so hard when I read the "Karen" comment because it's so true for that woman XD
But yeah story it so awesome