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RainyDayReader chapter 1 . 3h This is excellent! I can see Vernon going into a rage when the injuries have magically healed - at least, that was my interpretation of the twice daily timing of new injuries. Now I am wondering if Flitwick will share his insight. If not, Dumbledore might not live to regret the situations Harry faces. LOL |
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 7/12 Serves Dumbles right for ignoring a child's suffering! |
Ratus chapter 1 . 7/10 Yea! I do hope for follow up chapters to this story :) |
puma1sunfire chapter 1 . 7/10 Damn. Now that's some damn Newton worth cause and effect mixed with Magicks. Makes me want to start writing or see if fleshed out because it's one hell of a good idea. Also hell of a good kick to the ass of the idealology of "For the Greater Good". |
katmom chapter 1 . 7/10 I like it! |
BMS chapter 1 . 7/10 Wicked idea. (in both senses of the word) Serves the old geezer right. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10 I get it! Every time Harry was hurt by his relatives, Albus felt the pain. Great story. |
Morantz chapter 1 . 7/10 HaHaHaHa! I love that Albus had to suffer as he was the one who subjected Harry to all that abuse since he left Harry with the Dursleys. I think that is perfect! Thanks for another fun read! |
Zamia chapter 1 . 7/10 That'll teach the MOB for not checking up on Harry. More pain for Dumbles. Cheers. Z |
slytherinsal chapter 1 . 7/10 Excellently done |
Thundramon chapter 1 . 7/10 A bit too extreme I think, though it is possible that Harry's lack of injuries may have led his tormentors to escalate their abuse, I also wonder what will happen if/when Harry starts to fight back. Not that I don't appreciate Dumbledore's suffering, I can't help but wonder what if the protection was reflective in nature ie whatever harm is inflicted upon Harry is instead visited upon the abuser. For example, Voldemort gets the killing curse reflected back at him. Dumbledore gets cold from abandoning Harry on a doorstep. Vernon gets his own arm broken, Dudley breaks his own neck when he pushes Harry down the stairs etc. I think I will try writing a one-shot based on this myself if you don't mind me copying a part of your idea. |
AndrewWolfe chapter 1 . 7/10 Excellent work, and *deeply* satisfying. |