dont give team rwby or jnpr personas because one. they are irisponsible and have a sexist mind set. two they are not at all discreet and would most likely look for popularity with that power and that they would end up ruining things then helping things on mission operations. they do not know what the word stealth is even if it would smack them in the face. Also they are idiots who need to be smacked upside the head.

cant wait for the egg donner to lose her treasure and regret what she had done by throwing away her baby boy.

Have to agree with slayer2031, the main focus should be with the persona side of the story with the rwby crew as side charecters.
This felt clunky and to be honest i can't see jaune and akechi not noticing they're being followed with all the experience that they have against way stronger and more dangerous enemies, plus i really want to read about the rwby charecters reaction when everthing is revealed.
Don't get me wrong this isn't me trying to tell you how to write your story, it's just my two cents as a reader.
Whether you choose to re-write that part of the chapter is up to you i will stil continue following to see this story unfold.

You know what?
You have my full attention now good sir.

please make more chapters

I find myself a little disappointed that others found out about personas so quickly, even if they don't have the specifics. I was somewhat expecting that there would be an investigation of sorts with the CRWBY trying to figure out what's going on. But no, they just find out immediately because Akechi used a really dumb spell instead of one that would hide them from everyone except each other. I'm going to continue reading this because I really like the premise and enjoy the way you write, but I do wish Ruby and Jane hadn't found out about their peculiarities in the second chapter right after they met him. There was no effort involved, they just found out, right in the second chapter of what has the potential to be quite a long story. Now, unless they have a way to manipulate memories, they will be unable to hide the fact that they have abilities unknown to the greater population.

I understand the need to involve the CRWBY in some way, they are the main characters of RWBY after all, and that is half of the crossover, but this just feels very clunky in execution. Going into this based on the first chapter, it set up what, to me, feels like a focus on the persona side with some RWBY in the background. What with all the talk of finding the other wildcards, Akechi showing up, and the CRWBY not knowing Jaune. But chapter 2 brings it straight into the limelight by showing them the personas.

I was sort of expecting them to be a side group, where we would pan to them in some chapters to see how our favorite wildcards have affected the RWBY world. If you are going to make them into main characters, please go about it in a less clunky way.

I say all of this in the hopes that you can use anything I have written to improve your story, because I truly do want this story to be great. It has one of the greatest premises I've seen in this crossover section and I don't want it to fail.

I apologize if this review seems to be all over the place, I wrote it stream of consciousness style.
Once again, thank you for writing this, I am looking forward to future chapters.

Very interesting start here, just maybe remove the swearing cause reading "fuck" from Ruby and Jaune feels out of character, even with P5 happening. Keep up the good work!

please make more chapters

So will other rwby male characters be the main characters or just the same main chsracters

Ok I’m interested in what this story is going. I’m wondering where will Jaune meet the Child of Death and the Seeker of Truth.

I can image Jaune meeting Minato on a train ride or some store off the Main Street, like an obscure store that people don’t really go to, but the store is doing well.

Jaune meeting Yu would seem like something casual idk at a mall or something, hell I can image them meeting mid battle.

Meh. Sounds neat , but dislike that only girls can be Huntress’s.

Tf is this

please make more chapters

Interesting... I like it! This could be a great story if developed well enough, keep up the good work!

I’ll take your entire stock

Curious to see what happens next.