Oh man, I absolutely loved this chapter! it was once a gain a very emotional one. I also loved seeing that Hugo cares for Sofia. lol and I'm kinda mad with King Garrick. I see no reason why he couldn't have just taken Sofia and arrested Boswell. Poor Sofia. :(
Anyway, again This chapter was great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Omg! LOVED the Hugo chapter! It’s like the first signs of when he starts caring about her! Poor Sofia...
Btw, loved the line: “He knew he liked her after getting over losing the Flying Derby tryouts.“

Wow, this chapter was so emotional! I loved it! it had me wondering what would happen next and had my attention through out the whole thing. Excellent job on this chapter! I can't wait to see what'll happen in the next chapter. Poor Sofia, seeing her all alone in that wagon, poor her, I'm glad she was able to get Amber's message.

Almost cried this chapter... Great job, guys! Really touching story.

I love this story so far. lol though I can't say the same for Boswell. Poor Sofia! Why's he holding her captive is what I wanna know. Well I loved this chapter, can't wait for more! they were all on character, good job!

So cool seeing a different take on Finding Clover! You guys totally made Boswell a more interesting and entertaining character!