| Reviews for July |
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Paladin777 chapter 4 . 7/21 This was lovely. I could definitely see this taking place during some downtime in season 2. This being told with Aelita as the focus was wonderful. Her confusion and wonder, along with her decision to continue trusting her friends despite her apprehension was a great angle to write this from! The characters were all in-character, from Odd's food obsession, Yumi and Ulrich making sure to sit next to each other, Jeremy's shyness at Aelita's light snuggle, and even the fact that she's nonchalantly more forward affection toward Jeremy in early season two than she is later as she regains her memories. |
Raxius chapter 1 . 7/19 Here's some idea for Prompts Snow Ulrich X Yumi Vertigo Ulrich all of the group William can't swim In Marabounta he could swim perfectly but in the Secret He said he can't said swim do you think you can think of a prompt ? Anyway nice job so far . |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/15 My BrOTP is JerYumi so that might be coloring my judgement, but I think that this was the best one so far! It was wonderful to see Yumi reassuring Jeremy of his worth to the group, and the way she got snippy doing it was really in-character as well! I really liked the foreshadowing to Ghost Channel too! |
Rebelling Death chapter 2 . 7/11 Ulrich: the classic speedster Yumi: the female telepath who sometime has trouble with her powers (like Jean Grey, although I could be wrong on that) Odd: personality is comparable to Spiderman (interestingly enough, their main weapon is limited, Odd with his arrows and Spiderman with his webs). And they do pretty well in combat up in the sky Aelita: The winged angel hero Jeremie: Pretty much the non-powered person with a high IQ in the group |
Epsilon Tarantula chapter 1 . 7/10 Don't feel bad. I wasn't able to update GK in time for the AU prompt. But this was fantastic all the same! And ends on a horrifying note of idealizing suicide. Excellent! |
Paladin777 chapter 1 . 7/9 Wow, this is a dark, but uncannily realistic glimpse at how Aelita could have felt at the beginning of The Key. |