Great job ,i always enjoy modern Lancer stories more please.

This AU has some interesting aspects, including switching the plot. It left me wanting more "Lancer", however. Having a fully grown man slide into bed with his brother (another fully grown man) isn't something I'd normally see the Lancer brothers do. It feminizes the characters and not in a good way. Just my two cents.

Good story. I enjoyed reading it. Hope you write another soon.

Interesting AU... the characterizations carry over into modern settings... though when you made daddy the Commissioner, I began thinking of "Bluebloods"