Good chapter. I feel for Shawn; I know what it’s like to have homophobic parents. Not much else to say except keep going.

I am happy that Francis is not gentle and overly friendly with Lola. I really hated how he really had a second happy family in the show. This is more like a divorced couple, so much easier to stomach. Thank you for that. I am sure Mary and Francis will both learn from this time apart.

Francis is unraveling I love it. I like how Lola implied Mary possibly committing and Francis immediately going like “no.” He knows her better than that. Good chapter. Still wanna see what happens with Mary in 2014 of course :)

This is really good, and I am so glad that this all happened before Conde ! I hope that Chris can really help her, he has a modern understanding of rape and what it really takes to live with it. I don't think anyone can truly get over it fully. I think you know how Mary's leadership can help Chris get out of this undeserving mess. I can't wait for the next chapter.

First of all, finally you updated! Second of all, this was a hard chapter to read. But it was a good emotional bond moment between Chris & Mary, helping each other understand the pain they both went through; sounds like they’re gonna be good friends and hopefully look out for each other. I wonder how the rest of the dynamic will play out because there’s also Nathan and Shawn. So in conclusion: thanks for taking the time to type & update and I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reading this is starting to bring back some memories of watching reign with my sister. you write very well. You perfectly capture the emotions of each character. It feels too real. I want to see what happens with Mary in the present world next chap hopefully. Anyways keep up the good work!

What in deed. She seems to attract trouble even in the future.

I am so glad that this all occurred before any relationship started with Conde. I never liked or understood that storyline. Please update soon, this is really good.

Francis is so beautiful. His love for a woman that strong is truly a special thing. I really hope he finds his way back to her and she realizes that he was the one for her the entire time. Also hope she doesn’t forget who she is in the present world.

I am really loving this ! Please update soon !

Poor Mary, I feel for her. I’d be feeling nervous and uneasy around three new guys that were complete strangers. Wonder what’s gonna happen next with Chris and Mary. He seems to be the nicest so far, hopefully Nathan and Shawn learn to be a little more understanding maybe lol. And poor Francis. This story is amazing and I’m hooked so keep going!

I am really enjoying this and I really like that she is in the future and not with Conde.

Must say you have a natural talent for writing and telling a story. I feel for both Mary and Francis. I’m not sure why I stopped watching reign. But feel like I should restart it again someday. I hope Francis makes his way back to her and they mend the relationship.

I need to know what happens next

This is a great setup. I hope you continue with longer chapters. I am very interested, but it seems like a paragraph summary, not a chapter. I am hoping for an update very soon.