nice. i always enjoy a Halo SW fic. can't really give too much of an Opinion based on such a small sample size but I look forward to reading more

interesting, I'll see where this goes.

Me parece una porqueria alargada y sin sentido

Good job

Please continue! Not many stories have this good of writing recently, I'm glad to see another up.

Ok there's enough discrepancies here for me to say this how much do you even know what the halo universe at all because with what you have the slip space because here's the thing for it humans can't enter in a blink of an eye the coven it can't enter in a blink of an eye the forerunners the ones with most understanding and mastery of subspace can't enter in a blink of an eye.

One point I can put down to you being new or inexperienced you need to explain things because there's major gaps in each section of the story to what's going on and nothing gets explained later on in the chapter you need to go back and explain because it's a little to jarring for people who don't know as much like you.

All in all get yourself a beta reader to help you format this better and give you back feedback that you need.

Lastly while I've been negative in this review do not quick FanFiction good to make mistakes people going to point them out but you need to learn and improve and lastly good luck have a lovely day.

Yes please include Halo 5 story because story might be shit but characters are not also try to include Atriox and the banished too.

this seems interesting

Very good chapter! Loved the battle between the Swords of Sangheillios the UNSC and the Storm Covenant, and the mystery of why ONI would betray the Infinity... I'm very excited to see where that goes. Excited for the next chapter and the crew of the Infinity finding out they are in another galaxy. I wonder who they will make contact with first, the Rebels or Empire?

Nice, they will be in awe...

Very interesting. Keep it up

Great first chapter already, looking forward to seeing the next though I do wonder does the Infinity have all of its Frigates? or did it launched them before the Battle? theres a lot of special things on the Infinity specially with its MAC as it can fire Cargo Packages and Unmanned Vehicles with heavy payload.

The infinity macs can one shot a súper carrier like The one of reach, it can fire every 8 seconds any of its macs, and its 51.6 gigatons not megatons.