Thirrin, you are amazing. I have read all of your Naruto fics and I've always enjoyed them. These newest offerings are just fantastic. And this particular one is beautiful!

I love the world you've built just in this first chapter and the Sakura and Shikamaru fit their roles so well. It was like being with them on this little outing and then exploring the ruins. Her finding Kimimaro had me squealing just a bit, especially his reaction afterwards.

I think you've got a great solid beginning to this story and I would love to see it continued. So here's hoping and sending you thanks for always writing these wonderful stories!

I loveee the storyyy! Realy enjoy readinf this keep up the good work!

I have enjoyed every word of this first chapter of the story. I was actually imagining the whole piece with epic songs included in the background in my mind. And it is beautiful. Sakura reminds me of Merida from Brave. I like the choice Shikamaru as the knight who guards Sakura from trouble and Kimimaro as the shapeshifting dragon(?) is really a thrilling experience to see the action packed scene. I wish to read more from this story and hope soon. Fingers crossed. Patience is key. Thank you for posting this piece as a start of great adventure.

I loved this 3 I so am into KimixSaku lately and I've always like ShikaxSaku so this is just awesome. I'm looking forward to more 3

Yes! A Kimimaro/Sakura fanfic! I love the start! Please update!

oh i do hope you continue this later! gosh i want to know about the plants, and why the pixies became Sakura's friend!

oh gosh, I'm like the biggest sucker for that 'you saved my life so now my life is yours' trope! it fuels my very being
loved this one shot! if you ever decide to continue this, I will send you my first born (or $5, your pick)