Okay, where do I even start with this? IT WAS SO AMAZING! I WANNA READ IT OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN! THIS IS BY FAR, THE BEST INVADER ZIM FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ! I'M NOT BEING DRAMATIC, IT WAS INCREDIBLE!

Everyone is in character perfectly, and I think you captured the spirit of the show. Zim would be proud.