Good flashback, with Iroh and a younger Zuko. When will Aang find out? I wonder what his reaction will be? I feel like Toph knows already (at least that they like each other.) I bet Sokka may go into "big brother" mode. Suki's reaction would be interesting. Maybe dragging Sokka off as he rants. :)

Slow burn is always my vote!

Your humor is great. There is an art to humor, especially in the written word. I'm not the biggest Aang/Katara fan, so I think this might be pretty accurate. I mean, he's several years younger than Katara, and he's a bit immature. I do like him though, in a friendship/saving the world setting.

Hahaha! I love the "what happened to my feet" line! The word you may be looking for is "organically", referring to the sex part. Also, I don't know about contests, as I've never been in one myself. I think you've done a good job so far of portraying everyone, especially Zuko.

I love the glimpse into irohs part in zuko learning about sex, it definitely adds a good level to this story. hoping for more soon

THIS METAPHOR... I LOVE. You killed it! You also got Iroh's voice exactly right! Ugh I'm so impressed with this chapter.

Omg I feel like Zuko is projecting when he keeps saying "You don't have to/are you sure you're ready" etc. I personally would like to see more conflict with Aang (but maybe that's just because I find the whole concept of sneaking around/forbidden love/love triange interesting). I think I get a little confused about who's thinking what at any particular moment, since the perspective changes. Also Katara being insecure about her breast size is SO REAL. And Zuko saying "of course I'll like them, boobs are amazing" is almost word-for-word a conversation I've had with every one of my partners. It's so well written, but it's also going so well for them... is there conflict on the horizon?

Aww, I feel the love or the connection Katara and Zuko have here is done masterfully and sweet. I adore the simple communication. That part when Katara tells him she’s concerned he’ll leave and he’s like no, I won’t MY HEART, man! ;_; Everything is so loving and slightly awkward between them during all the exploration.

I love kataras realization of "i told aang no. I meant no. he needs to accept it and if not, that's not my fault"! I love it! so many people glaze over the female side of this and jts rare to see a girl be portrayed so well. I love it. I also love how zuko is so appreciative of her boundaries. it makes me so happy for her!

please give us more soon

Great new chapter! I’m loving this! It feels so in character for all of them!

This is so good! I can’t wait to read more!

Awwww I love it

Never would have thought I would be reading Zutara fan fics (I'm more of a Kataang shipper) but this is awesome! Definitely keep writing more chapter's please!

Please keep posting!

I can feel the tension and build up starting. A gradual burn. It's very nice. keep up the great work. Minor grammar errors and awkward sentences, but still great! Amazing.