Good idea, desperately needs a beta reader.

Good UwU

This was just one chapter and I’m hooked!

ah! I get those two references about Gandhi and Joseph knight I have read it, it's really great book glad you like to read that kind of book too

this is a great story, I can't wait for chapter 3, hopefully this story will continue

I just like to point out that you use a lot of exclamation points to end some the sentences when the characters are not even yelling (except for Bakugo).

I liked how you have Naruto be friends with Izuku Midoriya and that he gave him some words of advice. I truly hope that with Izuku’s help it could be a good influence on Naruto and make him into a better person.

Aww so the puppy that Naruto saved is staying with him. Still I wished that Naruto could’ve save the puppy’s parent from the last chapter. That part was sad.

Good Fic, I like where this story is going, but I can suggest that Naruto enters class 1-B and it is very repetitive that he ends up in 1-A together with Deku and Bakugo and that almost everything is like the canon.

Huh this story peaks my interest. I’m amazed how a 13 year old Naruto was close to killing Hawks. It makes me curious about Naruto‘s past and what dirt Hawks has on him. Naruto’s quirk sounds interesting, sounds strong.

Such a pussy this Naruto is

I really like Naruto’s talk with midoria, it was like saying: I don’t care what you do, it’s your life.

Ok, I’m very curious about this naruto, at first when reading this I thought this was a war-arc naruto that simply came to this dimension by accidental means after losing against kaguya and thus felt emotionally broken hit it seems like I might be wrong, BUT there’s a good amount of mystery about this naruto that I might be right as well, he has an ambiguous backstory at the moment and I like questioning which is the right one or the wrong one here. As for chapter 2... I enjoyed it too, I’m glad naruto didn’t try to bring izuku down and tell him what to do, he was straight with him and told him he could do whatever the hell he wants regarding his dreams. The puppy being back again is a little interesting, I wonder if naruto will become connected to it? That’s a question I’ll find out in the future.

Naruto is a bitch in this chapter wtf.

hawks will pay yeah right he did not even do anything to bomb boy this naruto is a pussy

nice by the way

hmmm i see... unfortunately he can't live like others kid. anyway, nice though. while i dislike his fake personality it is understandable for this story as he only want what benefits him the most